CHAPTER 7

Emotional Rhythm

This chapter is about shaping emotional arcs. It will look at the variations on the use of a choreographic approach when the priority is not the visible movement values themselves, but the emotions that the movements express.

Emotional tension and release are shaped by the timing, pacing, and trajectory phrasing of emotional energy. Practically speaking, this means that performance guides the cutting. For editors, “performance guides the cutting” is a much-used and well-favored axiom and offers a very useful starting place for considering the principles involved in the crafting of emotional rhythms. Being guided by performance means focusing attention on the intentional movements made by actors and, in documentary, by non-actors telling their stories.

In In the Blink of an Eye Walter Murch discusses using one intentional movement that can be observed in performances: the blink. He says an editor could look at when the actor blinks to determine the rise and fall of the character's emotional dynamic:

. . . our rates and rhythms of blinking refer directly to the rhythm and sequence of our inner emotions and thoughts . . . those rates and rhythms are insights into our inner selves and, therefore, as characteristic of each of us as our signatures.1

The blink is just one of a range of visible movements of thought or emotion. The performers’ faces and bodies make a dance of emotions—of impulses, responses, and responsive impulses fluctuating over their physical presence. Their pauses, hesitations, shifts of position, glances, swallows, twitches, smiles, sobs, sighs, starts, shakes, affirmations, denials, and so on are all contractions and releases of feeling, all energetic motions written all over the screen. Similarly, the rise and fall of intonation, the pauses and stress points, are the movement of emotion and intention through sound.

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FIGURE 7.1

Documentary generally uses non-actors, but the same rule applies: people convey emotions through intentional movements. In the documentary Thin Blue Line by Errol Morris, this character, Randall Adams, who is on death row for killing a police officer in Houston, conveys his innocence and sincerity to the audience through his movement and intonation, his upright posture and direct gaze to the camera, as much as his words. He was, as a result of this documentary, acquitted of the crime. [Photo credit: American Playhouse/Channel 4; The Kobal Collection]

In cutting emotional rhythm, a performance that has a movement rhythm within it is given to the editor and the editor has to work with that rhythm by making choices about it. The choices might be described as running along a spectrum from respecting it completely and not cutting at all to cutting in such a way as to disrupt it utterly and create a new rhythm. There is a lot of room for rhythmic creativity and decision making along the spectrum between these two poles. There are tandem considerations at work in making these decisions. One consideration is the strength of the performance—a strong performance is more likely to be used and to be respected. It will also shape the emotional rhythm by prioritizing the emotions it conveys, which is the other consideration in cutting emotional rhythm: Which emotion is being conveyed, for how long, and at what level of strength or intensity? This question will be answered in the editing process, and its answers may respect the intentions of the original script, or they may be swayed by the strengths and weaknesses of performances and shots.

In editing, the decisions about where and when to cut emotions are decisions about how to throw the emotional energy from one shot to another. I use a dance improvisation exercise called Throwing the Energy as a metaphor for what an editor is doing when shaping emotional rhythm.

In the Throwing the Energy dance game, the first dancer pretends she has a ball of energy in her hands. The ball is invisible, but she articulates its outlines by shaping and moving her hands around it. She plays with it for a while, letting it travel through all parts of her body, and as she does, we get to see what kind of energy she imagines it to be. If it is crackling, snapping energy, her limbs slash and jab; if it is calm and floating energy, her limbs sail and glide. Once she has played with the energy for a while, she passes it on to the next dancer. She throws the energy to the next dancer, who picks it up, as it was thrown, into her body. If the first dancer slams the ball of energy at the second dancer's head, the second dancer will instinctively reel as though hit. If the first dancer dribbles drops of energy into the second dancer's palm, the second dancer will crouch around the drops protectively, gathering them before they slither away. In other words, the kind of energy the first dancer throws, combined with the force, speed, and direction of her throw, equal the kind of energy that the next dancer receives.

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FIGURE 7.2

One of the earliest things children learn is to respond to emotional energy. As infants, although we cannot understand words, we still understand the energy with which they are spoken. For example, we shrink from anger or embrace delight, because the energy communicates the emotion on a nonverbal level. In this sequence from Down Time Jaz (Karen Pearlman, 2002), I used the children's innate capacity to respond to energy qualities in movement and got the child performers to dance very convincingly by playing the Throwing the Energy game with them. [Photo credit: The Physical TV Company; Dominika Ferenz]

Throwing the energy is what an editor is doing with cuts. An editor chooses the first shot's duration and frame to throw a certain kind of energy. This shot is then juxtaposed with another shot. The second shot receives the energy the first shot throws. The editor is creating an impression of cause and effect, an impression that the energy and action in the first shot causes the responsive motion seen in the next shot.

Because the energy thrown creates a cause-and-effect relationship with the energy of the next shot, the editor has begun to shape a trajectory phrase of emotional energy. For example, if a character smiles gratefully in one shot (the gratitude being the energy or intention that propels the movement of the smile), and another character shrugs awkwardly in the next shot, the gratitude appears to have caused the awkwardness. The timing, pacing, and trajectory phrasing of this exchange are a little piece of emotional rhythm built from the rhythm of the performances.

In the Throwing the Energy game, we watch the energy course through the dancer, changing and expressing her Effort, or intention. This is also what we are watching when we watch a character's emotion move. We are watching, on a much more minute level, the play of emotional energy in his body, how slowly he smiles, how awkwardly he shrugs. These are the expressions of emotion in movement. Seeing the emotional energy work its way through an acting performance is more subtle than seeing energy in a dance, but there are some specific things that actors do in creating their performances, which, if an editor knows to watch for them, can help her shape the energy and arcs of emotional rhythm.

PRACTICAL EXERCISE

Playing the Throwing the Energy Game with Nondancers

Playing the Throwing the Energy game with editing or filmmaking students gives them a very immediate experience of how this concept works in the filmmaking process, and I have found, over years of teaching, that it works equally well with any kind of students—they certainly do not have to be actors or dancers.

Get together a group of five or more people; a small classroom of ten or twelve students around a central table is ideal. If there is no central table that everyone can sit around, try clearing some space and getting everyone to stand in a circle. Start the game off by pretending you have a ball of energy in your hands. Shape your hands around the ball, shift it from one hand to the other, and then toss it, as you might toss a tennis ball to someone else in the room. The person you throw it to will catch it. And not only will he catch it, but he will raise his hands to catch it in the air along the trajectory in which it was thrown. I have seen students raise both hands overhead and stumble backward five steps to catch a wildly thrown pitch that is sailing overhead. I have even seen students duck when they think they will be hit by the energy and then turn around and run to the spot where it would have fallen, had it been a real ball, and retrieve the invisible, imaginary substance, the energy that was thrown.

When all of the students have had a chance to throw and catch the energy, there are two things to point out to them.

  1. They all catch the energy the way it was thrown. Make an example of one or two who made particularly responsive catches by describing the motion they did to receive the energy they imagined was being thrown. Then draw the metaphor explicitly by explaining that this is what an editor does. She throws the energy from one shot to the next. She chooses the shots, their placement, their duration, and the frames to make an emotional arc from one shot to the next, so that it appears that the emotional energy thrown in one shot is the energy responded to in the next shot.
  2. The next thing to point out is that the energy is invisible. This always gets a laugh, because of course everyone knows the energy is invisible. But the interesting thing is that, even though it is invisible, they all watch it. No one's eyes stay on the person who has thrown the energy, all eyes always follow the invisible ball to the next person. And this is exactly what the editor is doing to create emotional rhythm. She is catching your eye with the emotional energy and then throwing it to the next shot with exactly the right timing to keep you watching the invisible movement of energy as it travels between the performers.

PREPARE, ACTION, REST

One useful idea about actors’ movement comes from the Russian theater director Vsevolod Meyerhold, who was a direct influence on the seminal Soviet director, editor, and teacher Sergei Eisenstein. Meyerhold's influence on Eisenstein had a significant influence on the development of editing and film form.

Meyerhold developed a system called biomechanics through which he “tried to help his actors find the right pose, the right gesture or business, to figure forth their interior states as economically as possible.”2 One of his ideas is that every movement has three phases: a preparation, an action, and a recovery.3

Leaving aside, for the moment, how this theory manifested itself in Meyerhold's actual works, what is interesting for the editor of emotional rhythm is that it provides a way of seeing a trajectory through an actor's movement. It implies a phrasing in every complete action that can be marked off, with a conceptual grease pencil, as a possible place for a cut. If an editor can watch an actor picking up a cup of tea (or throwing a bomb) and see these three phases of movement, then the editor can ask herself: What do I need from this movement to throw the emotional energy to the next character or event? Do I need just the preparation? Is it enough for the audience to know that the first character does pick up the tea, and it is the way he goes for the tea that causes the other character's disapproving glance? Or do I need to see it all the way through to the first character's obvious enjoyment of the tea, and that becomes what causes the disapproving glance? As the name biomechanics implies, this is quite a mechanical way of breaking down an actor's movement. But if it is mechanical in the sense of “how it works” rather than mechanical in the sense of “machine-like,” it can be useful to editors. By watching for the prepare, action, recovery arc of a given movement, whether by an actor or by a non-actor, editors can find an optimal point to cut in the trajectory of the emotional energy to convey the force and quality of emotion required by the scene.

Biomechanics was developed by Meyerhold to some extent in opposition to the technique of actor training that his contemporary, Konstantin Stanislavski, was developing. However, two concepts that are also very helpful to editors in training their eyes to see emotions move come out of Stanislavski's “method.”

THE ACTOR'S ACTIONS

One important concept Stanislavski introduced to the training of actors is the idea of “actions.” An action, in actors’ terms, is the actor's psychological intention spelled out as a verb. The reason for making his intentions into verbs is to give the actor something to do rather than to be: doing is active, being is passive. Most importantly, for the editor, the action, being a verb, implies movement of thoughts or feelings.

Actions in this sense make the text or the subtext into emotional movement. If an actor has the line, “May I have some cake?” his subtext may or may not be the same as the text. He may be saying the words that ask for cake, but the subtext is asking not for cake, but, for example, for affection.

Actors will try to make their actions as active and emotionally accurate to their subtext as possible. “To ask” is one possible action, but depending on what the actor thinks is his real objective in the scene, “to ask” might turn into “to plead,” “to manipulate,” “to distract,” “to deceive,” “to declare love for.”. . . Whereas some of these may seem outlandish with reference to a simple piece of cake, it is important to remember that unless all the character really wants is cake, he could be asking for any number of things—love, time, respite, engagement, or forgiveness, for example. His objective is what he really wants; his action is what he is doing to get what he wants. His action is the energy that propels his movement.

An editor can look at the actor's movement (including the sound movement of the voices rather than the words) and see what an actor is doing subtextually. If the editor can see the action, for example, pleading, behind the words, then she can discern a point at which the action has reached its optimal energetic point for the throw. The editor can perceive the action as a movement phrase, see where its cadences, breaths, stress points, etc., are, and make the cut at the exact point at which she wants to throw the energy to the next actor for precisely the impact she wants it to have.

If we look at an actor's action as what he is really doing, then we can explain why cuts that don't match perfectly in continuity still work. When the emotional energy is being shaped, we don't notice little continuity errors or mismatches because we are not watching the character reach for cake; we are watching him reach for affection. Our attention is not on the movement patterns in and of themselves, it is on their emotional meaning. If the cut throws the emotion well, then our eye follows the emotion, not the cake. The emotional movement is visible, as Murch tells us, in the rate and quality of blinks and also in the breath, the tilt of the head, the purse of the lips, the raise of an eyebrow, etc., and all of these movements, especially seen in close-up or medium close-up, are effective ways of throwing the emotion. So if an actor reaches for cake with one hand and then picks it up with the other, this continuity gaffe will go unnoticed if the actor is truthfully inhabiting the body of the character. If the actor is playing his action and throws his emotion to the other actor with movement such as a hopeful raise of his eyes, then, as his eyes lift up, the editor sees the emotion move and cuts to his girlfriend. Does she reassure or turn away from that hopeful pleading? The editor has thrown the movement of the emotional energy and opened the questions, “How will it be caught?” and “What will be the effect this emotional cause has?”

Throwing the emotion well is not just a case of deciding on the cadence of the emotion being thrown but how it is going to be received. If we go back to the dancers’ improvisation, the dancers receive the energy as it is thrown, so what they are reacting to is not just the energy but where it is directed. If it slams at their head, they don't shake it off their fingers. Film actors are not improvising; even if they were on set, now that they're on filmstrips, they are not any longer. So, the editor can look both at the available range of reactions and at the available range of throwing actions before choosing exactly where to cut. The editor's job is to shape the movement of the emotion by shaping a movement that feels as though the actor who catches it is responding to what was thrown. It is the actor's performance that draws our “eye-trace”4 to the emotional movement; it is the editor's cut that determines the trajectory of the throw.

BEATS

The Stanislavski “method” has another word that could be very useful for editors in shaping emotional rhythm, which is “beats.” There are a number of possible interpretations of this idea, but for our purposes we will say that the beat is the point at which an actor changes or modifies his action.

For example, if a character named Joe wants affection but asks for cake, his girlfriend might say, “Help yourself.” But if his girlfriend is withholding affection and her action is “to ignore,” then Joe, having failed to achieve his objective (getting affection) with his first action, “to ask,” will then shift his action to any number of other actions as the scene and the director require, such as “to demand,” “to inspire,” or “to insist.” The change of action, or change of what Joe is doing to achieve his objective, from asking to demanding is called a beat. There may be any number of beats in a scene until objectives are achieved (Joe gets affection) or thwarted (his girlfriend breaks up with him). Keep in mind that, in the real world of a documentary or in a well-crafted drama, the other person, the girlfriend in this case, will also have objectives. She will have actions she is trying to do to achieve them and beats as she changes her action to accomplish her goals. The emotional energy is thrown between the two characters, back and forth. If Joe throws his request for affection gently, by asking, and the girlfriend throws back a block by ignoring, then the change of Joe's action to demanding is caused by the emotional energy his girlfriend threw. This is a cause-and-effect chain. Asking causes ignoring, ignoring causes demanding, and so on. Emotion moves back and forth, like a tennis ball in play. But it is the editor who shapes the rhythm of the game. She shapes it by choosing the shots for the energy they contain, juxtaposing the shots to make a dynamic and credible emotional arc and trimming the shots to the frames on which the energy is optimally thrown and caught.

What is important for the editor is that a beat gives her the chance to see the end of one emotional energy trajectory and the rise of another. The energy of the actor's movement will change according to the actor's intention, and editors who sensitize themselves to these changes can see beats as little movement phrases. For some it may be useful to articulate the change verbally, to pinpoint the movement on which the actor changes from asking to demanding. For others it may be just as useful to detect movement changes more abstractly, to see energy shift, to detect changes in timing, pacing, and trajectory, and to know that these are beats. Seeing beats in either way gives the editor the chance to see the rhythms inherent in the actor's movement. For example, if Joe's action is to ask, his eyes will move directly, and he is likely to blink at the end of his request, throwing it to his girlfriend with a simple and direct energetic motion. If his girlfriend throws back hostility by ignoring him, Joe will have a beat, a responsive shift of his action to this new emotional development. Possibly that beat can be seen as he looks away, blinks a few times, maybe bites his lip or sighs, possibly not. Either way, the beat will occur as he shifts into his new action, in this case to demand, and his eye, breath, head, and face movement will change again. The editor uses all of these moves as potential cutting points, because they are the movement from which she will shape the rhythms inherent in and constitutive of the meaning in the actors’ exchange.

In sum, editors throw the emotional energy of one shot to the next by choosing which shots to juxtapose and the frames on which to juxtapose them. When the throw is caught and the response is thrown back, the editor has shaped a cause-and-effect chain. To shape the cause-and-effect chain effectively, the editor watches for the movement of emotion across faces, gestures, and sound. The ability to see Meyerhold's preparation, action, recovery arc and Stanislavski's actions and beats gives editors the ability to see emotional energy move and ways of cutting emotional movement into rhythms.

CASE STUDY: THE HOURS

What follows is a case study on the cutting of a scene from The Hours (Stephen Daldry, 2004), a drama scene in which the emotional rhythm is shaped from the energy thrown between two characters as each tries to achieve her objectives.

There are, of course, thousands of scenes that could demonstrate the principles involved in shaping emotional rhythm. I chose this scene from The Hours in the first instance because of the brilliance of Toni Collette's performance as Kitty, the neighbor who comes to call on one of the central characters of the film, Laura, played by Julianne Moore.

Toni Collette has an astonishing capacity to reveal the layered symphony of emotion moving through her character's soul through the energetic movement of her face, head, and body. But her performance in this scene had to be balanced against the elegant performance by Julianne Moore, whose character is tentative and uncertain compared to Toni Collette's brassy extroverted Kitty. The editor, Peter Boyle, does an extremely effective job of balancing the two performances, shaping Toni Colette's to just the right amount of expressive activity and providing respite from the intensity of her energy with well-measured interjections of the restrained Julianne Moore.

This scene, with its surprising climax, is played almost entirely on subtext, and the richness of that subtext is experienced in the emotional arcs shaped by the editor. Boyle has been guided by the performances, but also shaped them to give balance between them and continually renew the questions of how each character's utterances will affect the other. If, for example, Kitty confesses, what does Laura do? If Laura probes, what does Kitty do? These questions, as discussed in Chapter 2, are not consciously asked. They are created and understood immediately by the movement that expresses emotion, movement that we experience directly through our mirror neurons and our kinesthetic empathy. The shape, rate, and intensity of emotional movement, the tension and release of the emotional questions it raises, are in the hands of the editor.

This scene between Kitty and Laura is complex and traverses, in the course of the 5 minutes it takes to play out, an escalating series of character objectives, actions, and beats. It starts with Kitty coming in on Laura at a vulnerable moment, when Laura is cursing her own incompetence at baking; her cake has turned out lumpy and lopsided. Kitty's objective at the beginning seems to be to boost her own confidence, to compare herself to her neighbor and come up favorably. Laura just wants to appear to be a proper homemaker or, on a more basic level, to survive, to keep her head above water in this competition.

Kitty notices that Laura has baked a cake and walks over to inspect it. Cut to Laura getting coffee spoons from the drawer as though she wishes she could just crawl into the drawer and hide (Fig. 7.3a). We see just enough of her tension to know she feels Kitty's inspection keenly and then cut back to see just enough of Kitty's tinkling, mocking laugh to know that her good humor is laced with scorn (Fig. 7.3b). Too much of Laura's anxiety in this exchange would make her look hopelessly neurotic. Too much of Kitty's mocking would make her look cruel. The balance that Boyle has achieved in the time spent on each of them and the timing of cuts onto their gestures gives the relationship complexity—there is friendliness, helpfulness, good cheer, and irony at the same time there is neurosis, mocking, and gloating.

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FIGURE 7.3

The emotional rhythms of this scene from The Hours (Stephen Daldry, 2004) are beautifully modulated by editor Peter Boyle. In this exchange he balances Laura's (Julianne Moore's) discomfort, visible in her tense shoulders and back, with Kitty's (Toni Collette's) friendly mocking to give the exchange a bit of sharpness but not draw blood.

Once Kitty is seated at Laura's table with a cup of coffee, there is a series of shot–reverse shot cuts of the two women in conversation. (Shot–reverse shot meaning seeing Laura from Kitty's point of view and then reversing to see Kitty from Laura's point of view.) This is a very common configuration for a two-handed scene, and the emotional rhythm is shaped by choosing when to cut from one character to the next. In this case Kitty's flirty self-confidence bounces energetically against Laura's quiet, self-effacing comments and inquiries. Until Laura says something that Kitty doesn't really understand (Fig. 7.4a) and Kitty reacts, first defensively (Fig. 7.4b) and then by withdrawing her attention from Laura and looking around the house irritated and bored. When Kitty's eye lights on a book Laura has left on the counter top, there is a cut to a wide two-shot. Cutting out of a shot–reverse shot sequence and into a wide two-shot (a shot with both characters visible in it) is usually a signal that the emotional objective of a scene has either been achieved or thwarted. In this case Kitty's objectives have been achieved—she is confirmed as commanding and vivacious—and Laura's have been thwarted—she has lost Kitty's approval by her clumsy introspection. Up until now, we have been watching the emotions being thrown between the two, watching first one character, and then the other, receive the emotional energy and bat it back. When the emotional question has been resolved, cutting to a two-shot gives the audience a more objective view of the state of play. The two-shot serves as a punctuation point, closing one question and opening another.

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FIGURE 7.4

After some chit-chat, Laura throws an idea toward Kitty that she doesn't really understand (a) and Kitty reacts by closing off her charm and openness (b).

In the wide two-shot, a book, Mrs Dalloway by Virginia Woolf, is in the foreground, in focus, and the two characters are out of focus in the background (Fig. 7.5a). The cinematographer pulls focus (shifts the focal point from the foreground to the background) in the middle of Kitty saying the line, “Oh, you're reading a book.” This line is an accusation. If the subtext were written as text it might read, “That's a very strange thing to do; no wonder you're so strange.” Kitty gets up, covering her distaste for books with a teasing inquiry and swinging her hips in a mix of officiousness and flirtatiousness as she goes to pick up the book, asking, “What's this one about?” (Fig. 7.5b). Laura, left in the background of the wide shot that Kitty now dominates completely as she rifles through the book, starts to explain, haltingly.

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FIGURE 7.5

Editor Peter Boyle comes in on this two-shot as a way of changing the subject and tone of the scene. The shot starts with the book in focus and Kitty's attention on it, out of focus and in the background. Then the focus shifts to Kitty, who takes charge of the dynamic of the conversation once more and sashays over to have a look at the book.

The spatial dynamic and performances create tension—is Laura going to manage to stumble through an explanation or dissolve tongue-tied in the path of Kitty's effusive handling of the conversation? Laura manages. She looks inward and draws on the strength she's gotten from the book to say, “Well, it's about this woman who's incredibly, well, she's a hostess and she's incredibly confident . . . .” Here Boyle cuts to a reverse shot of Kitty in time to see Kitty's expression change from boredom and distaste to apparent interest and delight as the key character in the book is described as “confident” and “giving a party.” Seeing Kitty shift from boredom to engagement is important because it allies Kitty with the confident character in the book.

Boyle then cuts back to Laura, who gently delivers a blow to Kitty, a velvet-covered hammer that cracks Kitty's façade. We are on Laura, who looks more glowing and energetic than she has yet in the scene; she says, ostensibly about the main character in the book, but clearly also about Kitty, “Because she's confident, everyone thinks she's going to be fine. But she isn't.” (Fig. 7.6a). This is an emotional throw to Kitty, and Boyle cuts to her to let us watch the whole arc of her receiving and responding to the emotional energy. Toni Collette, as Kitty, speaks volumes with her facial expressions, even the way she flips through the pages of the book, by slowing down and absorbing the impact of this blow to her fa çade (Fig.7.6b). She closes the book with a degree of deliberateness that says, I don't want to be like this character anymore, but I can't just dismiss her.

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FIGURE 7.6

Laura is gently cracking open Kitty's fa ç ade by describing the plot of the book, Mrs Dalloway. She throws her energy gently but confidently, and it hits its mark, making Kitty slow down and reflect.

Laura's action now is to expose Kitty; Kitty's is to keep control. This moment is sustained by the cutting. Kitty closes the book; cut back to Laura, watching; back to Kitty as she puts the book down; back to Laura, who says “So,” quietly; back to Kitty, who gathers herself together and tries for a perky smile but breaks it off to look away. I say that this series of five shots sustains the moment rather than being a volley or a series of throws and catches of emotional energy, because nothing changes between the two characters. It is as though the moment is holding its breath; they are both holding the energy, filled with the question of how Kitty will deal with this sudden revelation about who she really is.

Holding the moment in this way is a very delicate operation and needs to be done fluidly and lightly. All too often one sees a strong emotional scene become heavy-handed by sitting too long on the emotionally laden shots with no change or variation. But Boyle's handling of this moment is both fluid and light. He cuts very fast: all five shots in under 15 seconds. But because the characters are both concentrating intently, the very fast cutting does not draw attention to itself. In fact, if ever cutting could be called invisible, this is it. We see the movement between the two characters as though it is utterly “natural”, when of course, it is anything but! The sense that it is natural comes from the perfectly judged timing of the cuts. It feels as though, if we were standing in the room with them, we would look from one character to the other at exactly this rate, to see what would happen. I believe that this is an example of the editor's internal body rhythms at work in shaping the emotional arc of the scene. He is watching and cutting to coincide with the way the question sits in his own body, as though he has placed himself in that room as our proxy, watching and wondering, moving from one shot to the next, on behalf of us, quietly—without disturbing the energy of the scene, but quickly, so that we don't miss a beat.

The scene now moves through another series of beats: Laura has watched Kitty trying not to be like the woman in the book, the one who seems fine but isn't. Now Laura probes and Kitty confesses that she is also not fine. In the exchange that follows, there is a series of escalating revelations by Kitty about her fears and feelings of inadequacy. The cutting comes back to a shot–reverse shot pattern, and Boyle makes a series of very effective choices about where to place the cuts. As Kitty speaks, her sentences are punctuated with bright, fake smiles. Boyle uses these smiles as throws and catches of the emotional energy. He leaves a shot as Kitty begins to smile and pull her façade up (Fig. 7.7a) and cuts to Laura listening or nodding (Fig. 7.7b). Then he comes back to Kitty as the smile disappears (Fig. 7.7c) and she speaks the truth once more. Starting to smile throws the energy to Laura; Kitty is begging for reassurance. Laura's sympathetic nods throw the energy back to Kitty, and Boyle cuts back just in time for us to see the last few frames of Kitty's smile disappearing as Laura's probing sends her deeper into her pain.

The emotion escalates and Laura stands up, coming into Kitty's shot to hug and comfort her so that once again we are in a two-shot, when the objectives of the scene are achieved.

Laura kisses Kitty tenderly, lovingly, on the mouth. Kitty returns the kiss willingly. Laura has achieved her real objective; she has expressed her true desire, her love, her forbidden sexual longings. Kitty has also achieved her real objective, to get respite from her pretence, to be loved for who she is, not for the act she puts on.

But the scene doesn't end there. Kitty at first seems to accept what has occurred; she says to Laura, “You're sweet,” and then Boyle cuts in a long close-up on Laura so that we can see the dawning of revelation on her face. The time spent on Laura's reaction also gives Kitty time to pull herself together. It is a long beat for each of them as they adjust their objectives and actions to respond to what has just happened, with Laura moving toward her feeling and Kitty turning sharply away from what has passed between them.

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FIGURE 7.7

At the end of shot (a) Kitty starts to smile again. She is moving away from her pain by putting on a happy face, but Boyle doesn't let her get away with it. Instead he cuts to Laura, nodding gravely (b), and doesn't come back to Kitty until he can come in on the shot just as her smile starts to fade (c).

Kitty interrupts Laura's reverie, and Boyle gives us just enough time on Laura to see her respond to the interruption before cutting back to Kitty so we can see her grabbing the energy back from Laura and changing the subject completely. Now Boyle uses Toni Collette's performance differently than when her character was on the back foot, needing help. Each of the succeeding shots of Kitty shows the full smile, the complete preparation, action, and recovery of each smile and gesture functioning as a barrier deliberately thrown up between her and Laura, a rejection of Laura's comforting her, a denial of any need to be comforted. So the scene ends at the door, where it started, the relationship apparently unchanged. Kitty is confident, swinging her hips, click-clacking along in her high heels; Laura is disheveled, teary, and vulnerable. But as an audience we witnessed everything changing between them, because the scene was cut on subtext and emotional movement, and we are utterly changed by the intensity of the emotional ride we have just been on.

SUMMARY

In the cutting of emotional rhythms, editors make decisions about the extent to which they manipulate and alter a performance or leave its rhythms intact. The strength of the performance and the relative importance of various emotional moments in the story are each a consideration in the editor's decisions in this process. In shaping the emotional movement the editor throws the energy or intention of one performance across a cut to create the appearance of a cause-and-effect relationship in the movement of emotions. If an editor can see the performers prepare, action, rest movement arcs, or their actions and beats, the editor can use these physical movements as guides for phrasing the emotional movement, its optimal cutting points, and its rhythm across an exchange.

The next chapter will look at the movement of events and inquire into the processes and problems of shaping event rhythm.

ENDNOTES

1. Murch, W., In the Blink of an Eye, 1992, p. 62.

2. Schmidt, P., “Introduction,” in Meyerhold at Work, p. xiii.

3. Pitches, J., Vsevolod Meyerhold, p. 55.

4. Murch, W., In the Blink of an Eye, 1992, p. 62.

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